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Re: Worst Book You've Ever Read
Sadly, I'm an avid reader, and I have a few for this list. - Romulus, My Father by Raimond Gaita. This book, is by far the worst book I have ...
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Re: Charmed Soul
Every time I hear your euphonic whispers in my ear, my soul drags me to the bottom of the ocean behind the soft sand until my breath becomes labored, and ...
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Re: Dead Sparks
My sight regained, I saw right through her, Her lies fooled me no longer. She began to break down before me, And all the while, I grew stronger.
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Re: Her Heart Was His to Break
To be totally honest with you, I don't actually think that it needs much. It stands alone, and isn't that what we all want with a poem that comes straight ...
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Re: How Could You?
When I read the subject, I was truly intrigued, but I honestly love this. If it's for a friend that has hurt you, as the wording suggests, you've really captured ...
Oct 9, 2010 -
Re: "Forgot the Cold"
I absolutely loved reading this, it's almost magical in a way, but it's better than that. I love the fact that the repetition made it work more often than not, ...
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Re: The Love Poem
This is actually really beautiful, but I think I see what everyone else means with the last stanza. Unless that was how you wanted it to appear, but it was ...
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Re: Heart Song
In rhyming poems, I would try to make the middle syllable and the whole of word seem to rhyme rather than the end. This seems to create more of a ...
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Re: Teenage Girls
I actually wanted to write something like this to my former best friend. If you think that I am going to be passive about this, however You, my dear former ...
Oct 9, 2010 -
Re: Letter To Alice
I actually like the fact that this was written as though you have been to Wonderland; even if you haven't. I gives it more mystery really, because Wonderland is fictional, ...
Oct 9, 2010 -
Re: The Cloud of Loveliness
I found the sound effect things pretty cool but I didn't know what they were...they should have been in parathensises (or however it's spelled) or something. I kinda of agree, ...
Oct 9, 2010
