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  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: Pizza

    Hey there, Toly! I'm Sol and I'm going to review for you today. :D First, I'll give you some nitpicks. ;) “Papa can we go?” There should be a comma ...

    Apr 12, 2011
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: No Sympathy.

    Wow. This is amazing, Hessica. I must say you're an awesome poet. I love every single word. It flows greatly, and it's simple and catchy. It reminds me of a ...

    Apr 12, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Once my only love but now, my passionate hate.

    Hahah... I can't really give you a review here, Kagi. But my favorite stanza is the fourth. It's not a bloody battle or even a merciless war but the words ...

    Apr 12, 2011
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, General Re: Twins in Time (unofficial title) - Prologue

    Hahah! Hey there, fearless. You really are fearless, I must say. xD Well, I really love this, and I must admit I'm not a really good fan of this kind ...

    Apr 12, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: The Ocean Blue

    Nathaniel, I truly love this. I'm wearing out this poem, I've read it like 10 times so far. xD It's beautifully worded. I can see the mixed emotions.

    Apr 7, 2011
  • Short Story » General, General Re: I can't make you love me.

    WOW! This situation sucks, honestly. I love how you worded everything, honestly! The most surprising ending I've seen, honestly. And I would click the 'love' button if only I could ...

    Apr 6, 2011
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: -Deleted-

    Hey guys! Solvalery and I wrote this poem. Lol. She thought it was not complete and that it needs more 'drafting'. But I'm posting it anyways. :) Inspired by a ...

    Mar 31, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Black Lake

    Hey Sakura, I'm Solvy and I'm going to review your poem today. :) Beyond the trees, and out of sound, There's this black lake above the ground, It's hidden in ...

    Mar 13, 2011
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: My Beloved

    :O I wish there was a love button. Believe me or not, Sean, three days ago I wrote a letter/poem, like this called "Letter to a Stranger". And at the ...

    Feb 25, 2011
  • Short Story » General, General Re: The Royal and the Truthful

    I love the story, Mah Jelly Sandwich. If only we could change those every day situations, but some feel like they don't have the means to rise above and beat ...

    Feb 9, 2011
  • Lyrics » General, General Re: Magnified by Jash Bagabaldo *tweaked*

    0.0 *ehem* ... God! I love this... you're so extremely talented in every way, Abigail... I'm like... :O *FANSCREAM* I love you! lol Can I make you a fan club ...

    Dec 7, 2010
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: I Love You More

    Hi foreveralone. I'm Solvy and I'll review for you today...or at least I'll try. XD Ok... this poem... I gotta say I understand what the narrator was feeling... and I ...

    Dec 1, 2010
  • Short Story » General, General Re: The dog that never left his owner

    Hi CaptianRandom! lol I love your name! About the story... wow, I never thought I would like a dog story like this, it makes me want to love dogs. It ...

    Nov 28, 2010
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Nap Interrupted

    Oh, wow! Hi, I'm Sol! I must said this is a really awesome poem... I can relate to it somehow -_- lol My favorite part is: Lifts my tangled hair, ...

    Nov 28, 2010
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: My Secrets

    Hi, kinglions! I'm Sol....I Enjoyed this poem, I can understand it pretty well.... hahaha! I like it, it was interesting! Keep writing! What some people don't like others will! :wink: ...

    Nov 28, 2010


Poetry is thoughts that breathe, and words that burn.
— Thomas Gray