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Re: I am always with you.
Wow, Nate this poem is awesome. I totally love it! :O It's deep and the ending is just shocking. And the rhymes, it was so good and catchy. I bet ...
Jun 22, 2011 -
Re: Break that fall {Chapter 3} *edited*
Dramaaaaaaaaaa! I'm here to review as requested! ^_^ I will check the other chapters later... as you may have noticed I'm a slow reviewier... sorry 'bout that. Well, first off ...
Jun 19, 2011 -
Re: Love
Hey there, Trackrunner. Okay, so this is a really good poem. ^_^ I really like it. Except that you should make it look like one. Make stanzas, click enters. Here ...
Jun 16, 2011 -
Re: I Do?
Hi Jessa, this is a truly beautiful poem you wrote here. "this is the hardest part , " she says, "but he is meeting you halfway." This is a huge ...
Jun 16, 2011 -
Re: true love
Hi there, Flowerboy! I'm here to review. Okay, so first off I hate the fact that you use no uppercases, I think I'll get use to it or a better ...
Jun 15, 2011 -
Re: A Hundred Suns- Blind
Hi Wabbit. Here to review. ^_^ Wow. You are one talented writer, Jorin, I must say that. I really love this. I think your writing is amazing. :o I really ...
Jun 15, 2011 -
Re: I'm one of the crazies
Wow! Hey there Belarus! This story has potential. Your writing is very good, I must say. And I really don't have much to say. Just have nitpicks. :) Walking down ...
Jun 13, 2011 -
Re: Rainbow (Chapter 2)
Boo! I'm here again! Okay, first off, I think this could be part of chapter one. I totally agree with diasamari, caps are not needed, if you really want to ...
Jun 11, 2011 -
Re: Rainbow (Chapter 1)
Hi Scarlet. I'm here to review your novel. I'll try to read all the chapters that are already up. :) One thing that I suggest you is to make shorter ...
Jun 11, 2011 -
Re: Boulder On My Shoulders
Hi there, Nike. I'm here to review. :) Okay, so one thing that really bugs me about this story is the fact that you say, "I like you and I ...
Jun 10, 2011 -
Re: Her Replica of Amber Kindness
Hi Gheala. Here to review, as requested. :) Okay, so I like this story. One thing that really left me hanging is the fact that you never described your characters, ...
Jun 5, 2011 -
Re: Pregnant at 16
Hi 4life. Okay, so these seems like something that happens a lot in our actual society, and in a lot movies too. I think you should write something that makes ...
Jun 1, 2011 -
Re: What You Don't Deserve
Hey there Lil. I think there are a couple commas that should be replaced by periods. I'll point them out, because this poem is like one sentence. o.o I wrote ...
May 31, 2011 -
Re: the star who couldnt twinkle
Hey there, Jorge. I'm going to review for you. Okay, so this story is pretty fun... xD There's one thing I should really critic about it though, and that's the ...
May 24, 2011 -
Re: Pure and Simple (Warriors)
Hi wabbit! So I like how you write. As I've told you before you have a lot of vocabulary. o.o You've got me clung to the dictionary, but that's good. ...
May 23, 2011