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.......................................................................................*eh* What? Hi, WaitingForLife. You know what this sounds like? This sounds like rap lyrics. Even though, you're a

Hi there, Zaid Ansari. You have a beautiful name

.... Hi there, WinterBloom. Okay. I'm totally confused. I have no idea who's talking to who in this story. D: And I feel terrible about it. You should like... insert ...

Oh, my Gosh! I love this! *Ahem* Hi there, Dearws. Let me tell you, you have an amazing ability to make your poems flow. Plus, I don't think this is ...

D'awww

Wow. Hi there Icon! I love how you put so much emotion in your piece. It let us know that you were truly feeling it, and writing your heart down. ...

Bahaha! Hi again, spinelli! ^_^ I collided with other of your pieces. Wow. You're really good writing stories. You manage to make them catchy, and entertaining, and while reading it... ...

Uh, hi there spinelli. Hmm... I like your poem. You managed to do well along your piece. But the end just left me hanging. >.< Seems like you randomly inserted ...

Hi again, ZombieSquirrel! Wow. This is quiet beautiful. :o Actually, I don't know why you wrote it as some sort of prose. I think this has a rhythm and it ...

Baahahahahahaah, loooooool. Hi again, AngusMacdonald. This is so true. I love the subject. Bahaha... It might open a lot of people's mind. It sounds cogent, I love the imagery, and ...

Hi there dasiamari! Well... your lyrics are neat! But I'm just writing this to give you a tiny, but HUGE advice... and that is, try to give your topics attractive ...

D'aww... Hi there... *forgot your real name* o.o Silented1! I love the subject. All the while I was imagining this little kid, and when I understood what this was about ...

Oh wow. Hi there, ZombieSquirrel. I love how you put so much emotion into this poem. Great imagery, you chose amazing words, and it flows neatly. Although, in the second ...

Okay... Hi there WinterBloom. This looks like a good prologue for a story, otherwise it doesn't convince me. I mean, What happened after the character told him about her feelings? ...

Hi there, Rysa. Okay, I like the subject your bringing us. But there are some grammar errors in your piece and punctuation problems. I'm sure you can correct that. Remember, ...