Gardevite

Thank you so much for the review! :) I'll check that link out! (quotation and punctuation always confuse me)

Thank you for the review :D

Thank you for your review :D

With the capitalization here, I'm neutral. It doesn't take much away, but it doesn't add much either. I'd go with either.

(responding to your P.M) Okay, I see a very clear improvement in this poem. It's much easier to read and I can actually focus on what your saying. I think ...

You're welcome Welcome Welcome xD

I can't really review this. I found a few problems that other users already pointed out, so it would be pointless to rehash their reviews. Your point and opinion on ...

You requested me to review, but I don't think I can. I thinks it great the way it is. You made lots of valid points, showed your opinion without the ...

(accidentally hit submit) right, well I'm hapoy you're in the know!

(totally don't remember writing this

Small note: Yws does not take away publishing rights. Everything you post here remains your own individual work, and in no way becomes the property of YWS. If someone plagiarizes ...

Nah I think my mind just wandered. I kind of noticed how it strayed from the subject of the poem, so I kind of lost that opinion. xD

You seem interested in poetic forms dark, here's so more poetic forms from writer's digest There are so many forms out there, that would be a very long list if ...

Why thank you :)

There are two kinds of people xD I see sex, you see murder! XD