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Re: As Lovely as it Saeems
I think that this concept is a little... used don't get me wrong I have felt this same thing but because you didn't, Flesh this out i wasn't given a ...
May 6, 2008 -
Re: Hallelujah
Wow, I see what everyone is saying but i also feel that can be used as a style like Norman Rockwell he didn't do anything edgy but he is well ...
Apr 2, 2008 -
Re: Deleted
Okay first let me start by repeating the same old quote that i hear all the time " The poem is for the writer and maybe one other person and ...
Mar 24, 2008 -
Re: Worthy of Love
Grammatically and spelling i agree with what the others said it is still pretty rough (but my spelling and grammar are rough too) but The concept is interesting and i ...
Mar 24, 2008 -
Re: Alone
i think this was good and it definitely reminded me of myself at time because being alone is one of my biggest fears but i think this is a little ...
Mar 24, 2008 -
Re: Smooth, Real Smooth
well i agree with the imagery comment but i think that the language was great and unlike what was said i did love it and identify with it, it just ...
Mar 24, 2008 -
Re: When One Loves a Musician
this is kinda beat in nature what i mean is that it express a love for art but it also feels to me like the old struggling artist walking the ...
Mar 24, 2008 -
Re: Trip to Square One
this is a great piece i mean it had great emotion, i used to write really vague poems and it was until recently that i started writing actually and this ...
Mar 24, 2008
