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  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: As Lovely as it Saeems

    I think that this concept is a little... used don't get me wrong I have felt this same thing but because you didn't, Flesh this out i wasn't given a ...

    May 6, 2008
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Hallelujah

    Wow, I see what everyone is saying but i also feel that can be used as a style like Norman Rockwell he didn't do anything edgy but he is well ...

    Apr 2, 2008
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Deleted

    Okay first let me start by repeating the same old quote that i hear all the time " The poem is for the writer and maybe one other person and ...

    Mar 24, 2008
  • Short Story » Action / Adventure, General Re: Worthy of Love

    Grammatically and spelling i agree with what the others said it is still pretty rough (but my spelling and grammar are rough too) but The concept is interesting and i ...

    Mar 24, 2008
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Alone

    i think this was good and it definitely reminded me of myself at time because being alone is one of my biggest fears but i think this is a little ...

    Mar 24, 2008
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Smooth, Real Smooth

    well i agree with the imagery comment but i think that the language was great and unlike what was said i did love it and identify with it, it just ...

    Mar 24, 2008
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: When One Loves a Musician

    this is kinda beat in nature what i mean is that it express a love for art but it also feels to me like the old struggling artist walking the ...

    Mar 24, 2008
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Trip to Square One

    this is a great piece i mean it had great emotion, i used to write really vague poems and it was until recently that i started writing actually and this ...

    Mar 24, 2008


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