Galerius

And I think you missed my point almost everywhere! Thanks for playing, though.

Watch this space (a post to remind myself to review this).

Does that mean more to you than practicality and common sense?

Why are you all critiquing a work from July?

Hi Evi, Hahahahahahaha. Don't have time for a real critique right this moment, but watch this space. Hope that helped, Galerius

Hi Kylan, the night is full of snails tread carefully – the night is full of snails hobble-backed aborrances, making their slow pilgrimage, on the shoulders of the grassblades small ...

Plagiarism, my friend. Be a man and write your own work, thanks. Hope that helped, Galerius

I shall critique this! ...soon. Watch this spot.

Try harder The same could be said of your efforts to find relevant reviewing material. Seriously, people, check the date of the original post before you respond.

Poetry is allowed to be anything it wants, thats why its poetry. No. You're completely wrong. Listen to Kitty.

Please do check the date next time.

but please, no advice on how to improve it or anything to change...I'm sure you understand. What does this even mean? Why are you even here?

Didn't realize YWS was getting so serious. The fact that half the time, people on YWS aren't serious enough when critiqing is part of why YWS hasn't reached its full ...

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I'm not sure whether you still want this "poem" to be critiqued, but let me know if you do.