Galerius

Hi bailecielo, My heart is slowly lit, by words expressed with wit. But I'll remain on guard, for love is yet too hard. Already I can tell that this is ...

Quietloud, This poem tries too hard and ends up falling flat on its face as a result. Black shadows dance under pitch-black skies Black words spoken through angry black lies ...

She knew why leaving was the only option she had left. Why such awkward line breaks? It's ugly and constantly reminds the reader that he's reading a poem and not ...

There was fire in the heavens. The aurora blazed overhead, bathing the frozen Baja peninsula in vibrant colour. It was somewhat beautiful. But for Rob Reynolds and Dana Sentrosi, it ...

Anyway, I came up with some random lines off the top of my head. Then I'm going to advise throwing this away right now. Submitting "random" thoughts and bragging that ...

Twisted and perverted vines ensnare victims of wrongdoing. Wrongdoing? Such an abstract concept sandwiched uncomfortably between a tangible image and a vague ending to the stanza. Don't torment the re

Burning muscles scream in rage, bloody fingernails tear in pain. I'm slowly ripping my past away, every vain by fucking vain. The verbs and adjectives you use could have worked ...

Working title. Let me know if you have any better ideas. Yes, that's a very bad title considering that by saying "Pure Darkness", you emphasize only one point of your ...

Love is letting you pick your favorite film Titanic because he wants to see the smile on your face. The cliche here is almost physically painful. "Girls like Titanic, boys ...

Oh this disease, This terrible disease! I’m so difficult to please, Yet so easily diseased! The second line has nothing to do with the three around it, from the reader's ...

Evening wraps us in midsummer mist As it rolls into the shore from beneath placid waters, The sun still drawing its last fiery breath. Why bother telling the reader that ...

A/N This was written because I'm so upset about leaving school. Hmm. Did you write this in a hurry and under emotional duress without editing much? That would explain much. ...

paper-cut ragdolls, devouring the dinner that they aren’t going to get and choking on their second servings of undercooked oxygen; Couple things blatantly wrong with this. I'm assuming they're devou

I wish everything would simply be a dream. And then i could always be with you. but then, Not all wishes do come true. I've promised myself that I'd grow ...

Budding in sunlight an orchid so small, A flower of most radiant fragrance. "Small" is a filler word that means nothing and it just cheapens the imagery that you are ...