Galerius

Hi Jabberoomba, Just returning the favor for all the critiques you've given me. I curl to your warmth, and you hold me tight. My tenseness is eased as we lay ...

Hi vixeyt, I remember once upon a time When skys were blue and grass was lime Our children laughed and all were pleased To live in a world that wasn’t ...

Hi Lost, I am aware of the large amount of grammatical errors Then fix them. Why do you need people to grammar check you? Feed not from my soul; For ...

Hi HelpyPanty (too lazy to type in your whole username), You did not long consider the clear shallow water hemming the river, I dun get it. Water doesn't hem rivers...water ...

Such potential wasted on such sub-par substance sustenance. Watch: of emeralds and rubies Is this the beginning of the poem, as well as being the title? If it is, then ...

Hi Gabe.L, Don't listen to the above comment, most of it is terrible advice. First of all, don't keep oscillating between how you spell the God's name. It's either Odin ...

Hi Flower, First of all, don't bump pieces to the top of the page; it's against site policy. I'm standing in the darkness The light of you is gone. The ...

Hi phantom, Though pains of the past still haunt like the shadow in a corner. It's either a shadow or it's in a corner. A shadow in a corner sounds ...

Hi Justin, I am sorry that you have received no helpful criticism so far, but site policy forbids bumping threads for the sake of reviews. If you want an old ...

Hi Warrior Princess Voices, voices all around me, Empty words and gilded lies; Darkness and despair surround me; I wait for a sun that may never rise. Voices of a ...

Hi alohajuice, Tell me u didnt feel my feet touching yours in the hot summery air by the pool, and in our room Or my hands feeling your butt, and ...

I reach my fists towards my scalp And pull at the dark blue roots, Tearing each follicle out. Last two lines make no sense. If you're pulling blindly at something, ...

Hi springrain, Eager to restrain us, it rises, an ugly recess, blocking us, monsters, programmed to daily observations, drowning and drenching us in the waters of stress, overtaking us, soaking ...

Nobody else compares to you, Absolutely no one. Believe me, I've tried a few. The wording and imagery is all wrong. Imagery - because there is none. It's just a ...

Hi kris, Cover me with roses; the kind one never finds. To dedicate your love for me. Cute? This cannot really be described because there is nothing to describe. I ...