Galatea

I feel as though part of your problem with rhythm is steming from your repition of the last words in the first and second lines of each stanza. It makes ...

I'm not sure I understand the point you are trying to get across. All of these juxtapositions simply confuse me. You're right. It is something we'll never understand. I agree ...

This is a very nice piece. Check some of your lines for rhythm and rhyming problem. ...if you need ought call Jack" I'm not really sure what "if you need ...

mmmm sex. I really like the languid flow of this piece. It drifts back and forth complacently like the exchange of kisses and caresses and smiles. It reminds me of ...

I like the idea behind this, but I am greatly opposed to rhyming in poetry (personal taste issue). I feel that often times it can deplete the energy of the ...

I can completely relate to the emotion behind this piece. It's a pretty powerful message. You planted the ember of white-hot anger inside me. You fanned it to life, Feeding ...

My dear, this risks sounding...dare I say...adolecent? It just lingers on that line of cliche-ness enough for me to want to turn my head and stop reading. Unfortunately, I'm not ...

finely tuned, not finally least, I think that's what you mean. Right babe? This is a really...hot poem. The first stanza gives me an incredible shiver at the thought of ...