Galatea

It starts good, nice and metaphorical, intreguing with a good rythm. Then we get to "has quite some life" (which is a bad bad rhyme and it ought to be ...

This poem leaves me with one question: "So what?" You hate your life? So? Don't we all? Why should I care? Nitpickyness: [I hate my life the way it is ...

A friend of mine named Erin--her aunt had a doughnut from the Krispy Kream at the base of the towers every morning, then walked across the street to work. She ...

Oooh I love this. So deliciously violent. Your hand casually touches my breast, cupping it in your palm Willingly I allow you to reach inside me, your fingers probing first ...

You seem so disconnected from these emotions. Its like the speaker wants to keep the experience at arms length. A good device, and a feeling I can certainly understand, but ...

Hoookay, well first off, you certainly haven't lost your touch. Good, juicy stuff here. Nitpickyness: I’ve come to accept the way the sparkle of the ring on my finger catches ...

Okay, to begin with, this is a really solid piece. I appreciate the consistent tone and the uniform apperance. It helps the reader cope with the content a little better. ...

Sound good to whom, fire? Are you the grand master of what is or isn't good poetry anymore? Read through this whole forum. Every poetry section. There's a LOT that ...

I really like this piece. There's an intangibility here that I find really intreguing. I read it several times, to myself and aloud, and found something different every time. That's ...

Okay...since I have the time, I'm gonna rip into this. Make no mistake, I think it's a great piece, but I think we could ALL stand to have our poems ...

Why is there conflict? Why is there war? Why is there this war? Why must people kill other people?Who is fighting? Why? Why are they really fighting? Does the government ...

Aaah, teenage angst. This was a pretty decent piece, although terribly cliched. It's nice that you're willing to post a piece that seems to express an internal conflict, and its ...

Love is like A bycicle. Those who dont have it, Want yours. HAHAHAHAHAHAHA!! This makes me laugh, darling. And it's no wonder why, it's SO true! The second you're unavailible ...

Excellent work, as always, Brad. This is a really solid piece. Your really coming into your own style and as your poetry improves it is becoming easier and easier to ...

I'm replying to this poem after reading the other two as well, and I have to say I'm stunned. These are all incredible. I don't really know what else to ...