Gahks

Hey there! I like your username BTW - words are powerful and this is the year to celebrate them! Firstly, you used way too many passives. As you may know, ...

Hey Ringo! I've been meaning to review your poetry for a while and haven't done so yet... well, here's my chance! This was unbelievably good; a near classic. If only ...

Hey there! As an experienced speaker and speechwriter, I thought I'd lend my expertise to this! Firstly, please, please, please don't call it a 'text'. This is a SPEECH, remember? ...

Hey there! As previous reviewers have commented, you used some strong imagery. However, there were several problems with this piece that I'll pick up on later. Firstly, well done on ...

Hey there! This was an interesting first piece. As previous reviewers have commented, your comparison of love to music was extremely creative. There are. however a couple of problems which ...

While I must praise the therapeutic benefits of expressing your feelings, I found this poem lacking in substance. Your images - where I could find any - were quite effective. ...

Hey, fellow Brit! I saw your poem had no reviews so I thought I'd be first to contribute my reactions. Firstly, this was an outstanding piece, full of sombre reflections ...

Agreed. This poem does have potential, but it's lacking somewhat. It doesn't have any real emotional depth. Instead of finding subtler ways to express your speaker's feelings, you resort to ...

Hey Ringo! You have the joyous honour of receiving my 100th review! You express yourself extremely well in this poem. Your word choice is astounding: "Denude my tongue to sweet ...

Hey sportgurl! Firstly, I'd like to applaud you for trying to tackle a deep and emotional subject. "Bruises" is a much better title than "Drunk Alcoholic" - the latter simply ...

Hey there Penguin! This is great stuff. The edit from "sifting" to "thumbing" makes a lot of sense; it reads better. I agree that this deserves to be short and ...

First of all, please post at least two reviews per poem or story. It's just fair on everyone else, and that's how we like it here! You had some interesting ...

Hey Eimear! Great poem; I'm sure everyone can relate to the feelings of disappointment and regret in this piece. You have some really wonderful imagery: "Disappointment, that sickening swoop of ...

Hey there! First thing: don't preface your poem unless it is absolutely necessary. It spoonfeeds the audience yoru intentions; never a good thing. Let the language reveal itself. I agree ...

Hey there! I was passing by and saw you didn't have any reviews so I'll be the first to post! You have some really great imagery: "play tag with your ...