Gadi.

OH MY GOODNESS I haven't even finished watching the review and I want to give each one of you a big wet kiss. I feel like I'm more commenting on ...

Okay! Thanks. This piece is very hard, I think. I feel gross just for writing it. Thank you for your crits. The next comment is sexual, just to warn! [spoiler]Well, ...

My favorite was: "No, you have your tongue in cheek, rubbing against decaying teeth, hesitating before your masquerade can begin." ... and the rest, as they say, is history.

By the way... It's TOMORROW! Tomatina Festival, last Wednesday of August! WOOOHOOO! GET READY FOR SOME T-O-M-A-T-O P-A-R-T-Y!

OHMYGOODNESS This is just like a movie I saw last year! It won Best Picture. It's called The Departed. This is just condensed.

Ha. Thank you all. "So you have left the i uncapitalized on purpose?" Yep, I did. I tried to make the poem more personal (??? I hope it worked?). "The ...

This was so amazing! So sad. Much simpler than some of your other poems. Every metaphor, every description, every emotion was perfect. Congrats.

AAAARGHH. So darn confusing. I am confused. What are you saying???? TELL ME! My mind is BLANK. I liked reading it... but what the CENSORED does it really mean?

I made revisions!

I am going to get dreadlocks. They're so cool. This poem is hilarious. It's funny how minimal your poems are, and yet how condensed they are. Simple amazing.

I can't be sure, but wasn't there loads of fires somewhere in America earlier this year or something? Because that's what this bit reminded me of. I could be wrong, ...

ARGH! I just wrote this page long crit and it disappeared/ So let me do this one fast. I am fourteen: I have pics in the Post your Pic Forum ...

Hey! Thank you very much for your crits. "It's about a family being burned, no?" I'd let you decide that. When I wrote it, I imagined their house being burnt, ...

"Do you have any tip on how to leave out the rheorical qustions, but keep the depth in my poem? AE" Of course! The most beautiful way and simplest way ...

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