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Re: why?
E-M-O. Emo. blahhhhhh I didn't like this. Because I just wrote a critique. That was just like the one I'm about to write. And I'm going to tell you. You're ...
Jul 28, 2008 -
Re: a rose of love...
Gack. I didn't really like this poem. But it's okay, don't worry. There are so many new users out there who crank out a poem like this. And I always ...
Jul 28, 2008 -
Re: For Suz, on her birthday
Haha. This is really a playful poem. Very playful poem. Simplicty usually does it well, and this poem was certainly well-done. I loved the bareness of it all, the frankness. ...
Jul 28, 2008 -
Re: Abkhazia, Resolute [introduction]
Wowwwwwwwww. Sammy, thou has outdone thyself. This is superb. I am amazed. Every story is executed so sharply, so uniquely, so delicately, that I could not stop and stare in ...
Jul 7, 2008 -
Re: How the Silver Wears
Suzanne, you've done it again! This poem was, I think, one of your best. It was so sharp, and detailed, and wonderfully, delightfully dark. I am enamored with the whole ...
Jul 6, 2008 -
Re: Abortions.
First, let me tell you that you have a very unique, open voice. You truly do have a talent for speechwriting. Nevertheless, you had some problems with your speech. You ...
Jul 3, 2008 -
Re: Kansas, Bleeding Kansas
That was awesomely profound, Sam. Let me separate the good from the bad: Pros Beginning . Woooooooooow. Some biblical stuff, huh? "What was first must also be last--" this statement ...
Jul 1, 2008 -
Re: A conversation with the dark
This is very good. You always know how to pinpoint an exact situation, feeling, relationship, using only simple words. Your opened doors metaphore was very powerful and was the key ...
Jul 1, 2008 -
Re: I am to write one poem a day....
Hello! I've been wondering why nobody has commented on this poem, as it has been up for at least 24 hours now (I think) and it is by one of ...
Jul 1, 2008 -
Re: Would You?
would i? I'll think about it. Maybe if you fix your poem a little bit I'll consider it. Some stanzas were way too diverse than the other ones. They didn't ...
Jun 17, 2008 -
Re: You're such a screw UP.
ARGHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH! EMOOOOO! NO!!! Our Web site has a particular infuriation when it comes down to emo poems. This poem is what most people on this Web site would call emo. ...
May 6, 2008 -
Re: A Christmas Parable (Removed)
Meh. You've had much better, believe me--this was a piece of mediocre, coming from YWS's official script writer. Basically, it had a pooping plot. Too preachy, yes, too cliche, too ...
Apr 27, 2008 -
Re: From sea to shining sea
Hey! This poem is quite puzzling. I read it twice already, and I really can't understand it. What is your America? You keep saying neurotic, and I agree-it's completely unpoetic--and ...
Apr 26, 2008 -
Re: Purple
Hey! Thanks for the crit, by the way... Now, for Purple. First off, a great practice would be for you to start using good grammer all the time, on this ...
Apr 22, 2008 -
Re: Shadows
Woah. I have to disagree with everyone on here... this was one of your best. Yeah. I was blown away by your impressive metaphors, "I wish I were a fable", ...
Apr 20, 2008
