Gadi.

WOW. I am amazed. This is pure electricity. How...how did you write this? What was your inspiration? What...how? I have to say I loved this. It was disturbing in a ...

This is an okay poem. I liked how you rhymed it and produced interesting concepts, but much of the poem was bland and unprecise. It is short, and therefore is ...

Nice! You had excellent imagery in here, no doubt, and very nice rhythm. It was short and sweet, not a masterpiece but something very warm and introspective. I like it. ...

Ugh! I WAS WRITING A CRITIQUE ON THIS AND EVERYTHING JUST STOPPED! UGH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I HATE when that happens. Back to doing everything again... I like this. It was fairly interes

Mmmm... I agree with Misty and KingKamor. Misty usually doesn't bomb writing pieces, but I think this pieces deserved some kind of an attack on it. With KingKamor, I think ...

HAHAHA! This is amazing. There's basically NOTHING wrong with this! I chuckled the whole way through. The mama mia ending was delicious, and the rhymes were just perfect--they clawed at ...

Nice. I like the imagery there, though I don't understand exactly what you mean here...What is the softer way you are talking about? And "coke the rattle"? Sorry, my theasurus ...

Well, this was good... but not great. I like all your lines, but I HATE the structure. Here's a way to do it (maybe?): "Selfish greed and strange desires Hunger ...

This is a poem with a good flow and a good meaning to it. But to tell you the truth, it's rather bland. I liked the way you put such ...

Splendid. I love your poetry. It's so deep, but it's so...well, it's so professional! The words, the images, the themes, your simple portrayel and handling of words is just utterly ...

Wow. This is way too deep for me. It flowed SO well, and there was a lot of imagery and theme. However, I did not understand anything. This is why ...

Weird. Bizarre, actually. The thing here that really made me say WOW! is your word choice. It was precise, and yet very interesting and full of flow and imagery. Other ...

Haha! This poem can be comical and true in the same time. Who would've thought of mixing lemon juice and honey? (I didn't!) Anyways, to the review... There's a problem ...

Wow. I love this. It was incredibly entertaining, very witty, very beautiful. The rhymes were superb. I can't find anything bad, except one minor thing that bugged me personally: "The ...

I liked it. Well, I liked the poem, not what I was reading. It was interesting and very well-written. I liked your use of short lines to increase tension, it ...