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Mmm... It's interesting. I found the poem quite light and cheerful, with a lot of numerous to the song, especially "Let me take you down"...though the poem had a contradictory ...

Nice. This kind of gave me like an American feel to it, especially because everything is automatic in America--plus front porch and cigarettes make me think of the American South. ...

The first stanza really caught my attention--other than that, the poem did not do anything at all. As usual, it had amazing rhythm, metaphores, imagery... but other than that... nothing ...

I have to say, the best thing about your poetry is your style, not your message. Because here, I was too involved in the beauty of your words to actually ...

Mmm. This is one of those sophisticated poems that I can't even digest. It's really good. I understood some of the ideas, but mostly...bleh. It was too hard for me ...

Haha! This is simply hilarious! I loved this! It's so infantile but it's so... well, entertaining in the same time. I had to stop only once--"dusty-dust" ruins the line. Just ...

I liked this poem--most of the major mistakes in this poem are so easy to overlook, and that is why it looks like a first draft of something. "What are ...

Mmmm..... Mmmmm.... Good idea. Weird idea. Unbelievable idea. And the story ended up unsatiric. It seemed like a real-life article, and that certainly didn't make me laugh. It bothered me. ...

WOW! This poem was beautiful. It flowed amazingly, and just showed me how a poem so...well, lacking of poetic elements can be so not bland and full of life. I ...

Mmm.... I dislike it as a poem, but it's wonderful as song lyrics. Why not a poem??? A poem, defined by Dictionary.com, is a composition in verse, esp. one that ...

HAHAHA! I liked this! It was hilarious. Random and yet pop culture-y. The ending was weird, but it was... well, I did't like it too much. In the beginning I ...

Nice! This really made me understand what the dance is like, especially the last lines--broken dolls is a good way to put it. It's sort of like everybody was circling ...

Ha! It's funny, but it's still very thought-provoking, as elephantwalrus said, and yet it's also quite bizarre, in a deep, evil way. I liked that you made such innocent play ...

I like this poem. It had incredibly language, beautiful images, an interesting concept, amazing assonance (The page os too white to write on, to de file with...) But the structure ...

Nice! This is pretty good for a first post, I have to say, and I liked it. Good job so far. Your metaphore was a bit cliche, but I think ...