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Wow---five months ago, was it, when I last read this story? I love it. It's genius. I especially love the sense of, well, steps climbing up until the climax--the suspense ...

This was really funny--not really laugh at loud, but still roll on the floor chuckling histerically on the inside. The best line was “You will not conquer me,” Tanya said ...

Just skipping through...I might get back a critique: I read the first, like, tenth, and the last fifth, the last fifth being read before the first tenth, no idea why. ...

I would call this poem half-baked. You sound like you know what you're doing, but the poem itself is not ready for eating up. Here's a line by line commentary: ...

I have to say, emo emo emo emo emo em eo emo emo emo emo. Because it really is. And that's not... that good. My mind can't take it (anymore) ...

I see you like structured poetry a lot. I mean, every stanza in your poem is: Blah blah (,) blah blah, Blah blah blah blah blah. It's a pattern that's ...

This was good. It really gave off an almost eerie, deathly metal mood, very cold and indistinctly criticizing. The beginning is interesting: "Beneath the rose" sort of puzzled me a ...

This is a truly exceptional piece. Your style is distinct; your story is touching. It's not the best from this site, though, but I can't find any fault with it. ...

That was astounding. The way you put romance into such a bare object as a chance meeting between two specific persons was incredible. I love the beginning, which is a ...

I agree with the others: simple, short, sweet, yet not memorable. I don't know how, but maybe you should squeeze some summery images into it...then it would have a certain ...

I like them both in different ways--the first one is more simplistic, more narrative, but not more personal that the other--which is much more formal and royal, sort of like ...

It read nicely, but overall this wasn't too good. It seemed too confused and, well, blankish regarding the emotion or meaning behind the words. The title didn't fit and the ...

This would be pretty short but I have to say that it was somewhat intriguing, though I was not glued to the screen. ---The dialogue was a bit...welll...unrealistic. The way ...

Well, this would be short--it's WAY past my bedttime. I liked this in the sense that it rhymed and had a good rhythm, but the content and the presentation itself ...

Wow! Now, to tell you the truth, it isn't a poem. It's more like a narrative in a poem form, not a poem in a narrative form. It seems like ...