It's not really my kind of poem...I enjoyed the voice and the sound very much, and you definitely have a talent for that. I just dislike poetry that's about an abstract or broad concept.
The first stanza was excellent. Loved it. The poem got progressively worse, and I hated the last line about Big Brother. It's a pop culture reference I think is overused and there was really no need to bring it up here.
-Colleen
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