Futurenow

Hey, there! Great job on this. I loved the first paragraph; the building details intrigued me to continue. I didn't see any blatant issues, so I'm just telling you some ...

Hi there! Nice job- this is a beautiful and flowy (is that a word?) poem. A couple of slightly awkward lines: "I just notice, in time" I kept wishing that ...

Hello, Ariana! Nice poem, but it needs some work. I feel like in lines 1 and four, you started a thought that I assumed you would continue on in the ...

Hello, shineuntiltomorro! I absolutely loved this poem. The only thing I did't like about it was the format. Until the last two lines, looks like it is written in paragraphs, ...

Hey there Persy! Future is here to review your work. Nice poem! The Bad: "your hands were clammy and small, withdrew from mine." The word "withdrew" doesn't work here, grammatically ...

Hi there! Future here to review your work. Nice job on this piece- it's very original. There were a couple of grammatical errors here, though. First of all, in multiple ...

Just reviewing the revised poem here: I really don't have anything negative to say about this poem. I liked your use of italics on certain words. I also loved how ...

Hi, fictionfanatic! Good work on this, but I have a few critiques. First of all, I'm pretty lost when it comes to the title. I just don't think it makes ...

This is really impressive and enthralling. I loved the beginning parts- I was very confused only in one part, which was in the eighth stanza. Maybe I'm just being stupid ...

This story was a pleasure to read. I really liked how you built the importance of the event- first it was just a nerve-wracking concert, then a concert at a ...

Very entertaining- I hope you continue the story. I could definitely see this on a screen, but the scene change here might be awkward onstage, although you might not be ...

Hi, alliecat98! This is my first review, so I'm not sure if it will be any good, but here we go! I really enjoyed the story, however I did not ...