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Re: Revenge Tastes Sweeter Than Justice
It's for a contest, i can only write one page. But thanks for your review, I'll definitely use your advice!
Nov 15, 2013 -
Re: Delilah Betrayed
So dramatic! I love it :)
Jun 1, 2012 -
Re: Ocean
11-12
Mar 10, 2011 -
Re: The legend of PAUL 5290. (Not a bible story, thanks MoMo!)
I just wanted to say something. ya'know how Paul is a guy in the bible? I want to know how many people clicked in it thinking it was a bible ...
Feb 23, 2011 -
Re: Lilly Evans' diary 12
I just want to say that by now in her life, at least 13, she should be spelling a few more things correctly.
Jan 26, 2011 -
Re: Ocean
oh yeah. I felt young.
Jan 22, 2011 -
Re: Ocean
Thanks you too! yeah, as I read it now I realize that I wasn't as great a writer then as I though. Maybe I'll put an edited version on here ...
Dec 26, 2010 -
Re: Harry Potter, Voldemort and a cookie.
Hermoine not Hermonie .
Dec 19, 2010 -
Re: Angel Wars Chapter 2
whoops
Nov 5, 2010 -
Re: Silence
nice poem. I especially liked the last part, about dancing in a meadow. Wouldn't that be fun?
Oct 24, 2010 -
Re: I'm Cold
I don't think it needed a moral, it was for the scary stories contest. Good job, didn't see any problems
Oct 16, 2010 -
Re: Before I Died
It's interesting- YOu had a lot of simple spelling and grammar mistakes though-you might want to reread it and fix those.
Oct 16, 2010 -
Re: Ice Castle
OMG I love it! Great feeling to it also. try to use more big words!
Oct 15, 2010 -
Re: f
I like it, It has a certain sarcasticness to it that most poems don't have. Let me guess, It took you ten minutes to write that? Try making it clearer ...
Oct 14, 2010 -
Re: Say This is a Title
I like it, It feels very personal. Hopefully it isn't from your experience though ;)
Oct 13, 2010