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Re: I will get out!
Hi there, I'm here for a review! Congratulations on a newly published piece. Also, welcome to YWS! I think you will like it here. Let's start with the negative aspects ...
Aug 15, 2015 -
Re: Lake of the Moon
Hi there, Inspiredravens! I'm here for a review! I don't usually enjoy romantic fiction, stories, or anything that has something to do with romance. Not my cup of tea. But ...
Aug 15, 2015 -
Re: Songbird
Hi there ! I'm here for a review. To begin with, congratulations on a lovely piece! I have to say that I truly enjoyed it. However, I did find some ...
Jul 15, 2015 -
Re: The Forgiven Sin
Hello there, I'm here for a review! Let's get started! First of all, I would like to say that your story is indeed original. The topic you wrote about is ...
Jul 14, 2015 -
Re: I Like This House
Hi there, I'm here for a review! :) Well, I have to say that this is a job well-done. Like stated before, your work is original.Many other horror stories involving ...
Jun 14, 2015 -
Re: The Dead Lady in the Kitchen
Hi there, I'm here for a review! :) To start, this is a really well-written piece. From the first few lines, you have already managed to grab my attention. In ...
Jun 14, 2015 -
Re: She Isn't Normal and Never Will Be
Hi there :) I'm here for a review. First of all, well done! It's an amazing piece.The story is quite dramatic, yet very realistic and I feel that some people ...
Feb 18, 2015 -
Re: All In Good Time - (He's My Puppy Part 2)
Hey again ! I'm rather excited to see that you've made a follow up ! :) I can't wait to see how this will all trurn out. The good parts ...
Feb 18, 2015 -
Re: He's My Puppy
Hi there ! I'm here to review :) Congratulations on your first short story ! Well done. I shall start with the good things first. The opening is rather well ...
Feb 17, 2015 -
Re: The Thing We All Go Through
Hello :) Well that's a lovely little piece isn't it ? :D Fits perfectly for the theme of Valentine's Day, yet you managed to make it original.The ending was a ...
Feb 16, 2015 -
Re: Labels
Hello there :) Nice work ! Truly inspiring and empowering . I think from reading your piece of work, everyone can find that they relate, at least in some way. ...
Feb 16, 2015 -
Re: Aunt Vera
Hello there :) Lovely, gripping story, I must say. I like the idea behind it, and I can almost visualize the entire story line, as if it was part of ...
Feb 16, 2015 -
Re: Me and my misery
Hi :) Short and simple, but nevertheless dramatic with a bold theme! The content of your poem is easy to relate with and I can assume that when creating it ...
Feb 15, 2015 -
Re: Night Sailing
Hi :) I'd like to drop a review ! First of all, and what I just love the best about this short piece is the imagery ! It's so clear ...
Feb 15, 2015 -
Re: Scars
Hi there :) I'd like to drop a review. Firstly,it's a beautiful piece of writing! I'm out of words :D The repetition is very effective and your poem has a ...
Feb 15, 2015
