FreakyDoo12

Oh, THANK YOU.

I have some serious spelling issues going on here. Yeah, I was so excited that I couldn't type wait properly, oh boy.

Oh I really like this. it has dark elements to it yet it is interesting. I am just wondering what made you write this? THANK YOU.

Ok first to review. Is this some kind of Biography or what, I read and It was quite interestint but can you please make it longer and check your punctuation. ...

Hey try again.

Oh my. I love your descriptions,. I'm quite busy now so I'll come back and review it properly.

Oh, this is interesting. the greater part has been corrected already so thats good. What is up with the mother anyway? Ican't ait to read the next chapter.

Wow, great story. it sounds so sad and yet genuine. Do you mind telling me why her mum kicked her out or is it in the next chapter.

So I don't ussually read stories like these so there is no need to be harsh, it was quite interesting the description you gave I mean. But what is it ...

C'est bon

well that is better if is one big joke. i would totally make a joke out it as well. Any way more hilarious than the first one.

Wow, another brilliant story once again!! Good job on describing your characters, I spotted something you said about a preface. Where is it? Anyway, I don't really comment kindly since ...

I can't believe it!! It was well done!! That could totally be made into a book. Hey could you write more? i'VE BEEN TRYING TO LOOK FOR HARRY POTTER FAN ...

I am a devoted twilight fan and i don't really like people taking a piss from the book but i think this was quite hilarious, write more fan fic please, ...