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Re: What is it like?
*alarm sound* its tiiiiiiiime for a review! Okay, so first off I love what you wrote. The idea I do feel should go on more. I felt like this whole ...
Nov 4, 2015 -
Re: don't answer the door in your pajamas
This review does't even need an intro, lets get right to it! I want to start off by saying; I did not expect this to go how it did. But ...
Oct 27, 2015 -
Re: Keep on Trying, Keep on Flying
*alarm sounds* It's tiiiiiimeeee for a review! Okay, the first thing that jumped out at me are the "F L Y I N G" and "D Y I N G". ...
Oct 27, 2015 -
Re: Far Away
*alarm sounding off* It's tiiiiimmmeeee for a review!!! Okay, first off, I want to say that I read the comments below before starting to write this so I don't repeat ...
Oct 23, 2015 -
Re: choking on air
Hey darlig! Here for a quick review! First off, I want to say I can pull out SO much from your poem. Mostly because I feel as if I can ...
Oct 14, 2015 -
Re: The Line Between Heaven and Hell (Experiment)
Hey Rainbow! I'm here to give ya a review! So, i'd like to start that I believe you have a very strong idea with your poem, but I have a ...
Oct 6, 2015