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  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, Fantasy Re: Cehyn in the Earth(Chapter 3)

    Hello Mailice! Thanks for pointing out what I have gotta improve. I will work on those short sentences. I tried to make the long sentences shorter but seems like they ...

    Sep 4, 2021
  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, Fantasy Re: Cehyn in the Earth(Chapter 2)

    I'm wondering now how you started writing. Did you make notes of what the plot was going to be? Or did you develop the characters and then a plot? Or ...

    Sep 4, 2021
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Science Fiction Re: Cehyn in the Earth(Chapter 1)

    Hey Mailice! Thanks for the review. It's true that I didn't have a very clear impression of how to start. I will have to edit the whole chapter and make ...

    Sep 4, 2021
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fantasy Re: The Quest for Fire - Into the Mists - Chapter 13

    Thanks :D Just wait for 2 days more and I will get to those. I wanna finish the Checklist Challenge first :D

    Sep 3, 2021
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Happy Teacher's Day

    Heu, thanks for the review! I am glaf that you got an idea of what to give. I agree some lines seem to a bit forced and I blame the ...

    Sep 3, 2021
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: A genius's encyclopaedic answer sheet

    Thanks for the review. I am highly doubtful this student know the answers to the questions. :D

    Sep 3, 2021
  • Poetry » Mystery / Suspense, Horror Re: The Purge II

    Oh oh I see. Totally interpreted in a different way. *Facepalm*

    Sep 3, 2021
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Course of Life

    Yea, it happens. I also sometimes don't receive notifs. Anyway, thanks for clarifying. Now, the symbolism is clear to me. And thanks for that, I want to do at least ...

    Sep 3, 2021
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Science Fiction Re: Survival: The Escape, Chapter 2.4

    Hm... Studies... I like studying... I do study... But well, at last, I forget everything and I don't study before exams. Strange. :D Seems like your novels do not have ...

    Sep 2, 2021
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Science Fiction Re: Survival: The Escape, Chapter 2.5

    Good. I should have thought about that that the aliens might not know what a school is. *Facepalm* Anyway, interesting and thanks for clarifying the names. Wow, I have done ...

    Sep 2, 2021
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Science Fiction Re: Survival: The Escape, Chapter 2.4

    XD. It's really pathetic how I am doing reviews when I should be studying for my ongoing exams. I really wanna finish the Checklist challenge as soon as I can, ...

    Sep 2, 2021
  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, Fantasy Re: Cehyn in the Earth(Chapter 3)

    Thanks for the review!!! Cehyn is kind of odd human being. XD. And about the Gorpies, basically they are the inhabitants of the Earth's core. I like personifying things. :D ...

    Sep 1, 2021
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Happy Teacher's Day

    Hey thanks for the review! You didn't at all do a "terrible" review. It was quite a good review :)

    Sep 1, 2021
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Happy Teacher's Day

    Hey Stellarjay! Thanks for the review. I get your point. Writing the acrostic seemed to be way harder than I had thought. To keep that, I had to write those ...

    Sep 1, 2021
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Happy Teacher's Day

    Thanks for the comment! Glad that you liked it. It was my first try at writing an acrostic.

    Sep 1, 2021


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