User avatar

ForeverYoung299

ForeverYoung

  • Novel / Chapter » Mystery / Suspense, Action / Adventure Re: Ch 12: The Mystery Solvers

    Hey Mailice! I will re-write it when I am free or without any inspiration to do anything. As I haven't re-written any story earlier, it seems to be quite interesting. ...

    Sep 9, 2021
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Historical Fiction Re: Fool Without A Master (Chapter 1 Part 2)

    That sounds interesting :D

    Sep 9, 2021
  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, Historical Fiction Re: A Carolina Millennial in A Prehistoric Tribe: Chapter Five

    Thanks for the clarifications :) And talking about good and bad, the first one counts as a good question and the second one counts as a confusion. Sometimes, confusion is ...

    Sep 9, 2021
  • Novel / Chapter » Horror, Mystery / Suspense Re: Mr. Quirk(Chapter 8)

    Hey RandomTalks! I am too lazy to reply to all the reviews that you left on this story but I have read all of them and they are very helpful ...

    Sep 8, 2021
  • Article / Essay » Culture, Narrative Re: The Faraway Hill (part 1 of 2)

    Oh no no I am really sorry if that offended you by any means. You know what I have some problems with thid... I mean you know mental problems... I ...

    Sep 8, 2021
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Science Fiction Re: Survival: The Escape, Chapter 4.5

    Ooh I see. Great :D

    Sep 8, 2021
  • Article / Essay » Culture, Narrative Re: The Faraway Hill (part 1 of 2)

    Thanks for the clarifications :) And about that superstition, I know that was not meant to be funny but that sounded a little bit funny to my ears. I don't ...

    Sep 8, 2021
  • Short Story » Realistic, Other Re: The Paper Boat

    Oh oh XD, that appeared to be a fight, if you see from the perspective of a 7 year old. And about the wax and gluw, I didn't know about ...

    Sep 7, 2021
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Science Fiction Re: Cehyn in the Earth( Chapter 4)

    Harry, thanks for the review. I love putting cliffhangers, seriously. :D I really wonder where this is gonna go. This should go somewhere. And XD, forgetting names is not a ...

    Sep 7, 2021
  • Novel / Chapter » Literature, General Re: Ch 3: A Good Tiding For Lonely Marie & Ch 4: A New Place

    Hey! Thanks for the review! And about what I read.................................................. If I try to extend this, this will keep extending cuz I haven't really read many books :( The only ...

    Sep 7, 2021
  • Novel / Chapter » Literature, General Re: Ch 5: A New School

    Thanks for the review :D

    Sep 7, 2021
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Science Fiction Re: Cehyn in the Earth( Chapter 4)

    Thanks for the review. And I will make sure to elaborate on the other topic in the upcoming chapters. YWS wasn't wallowing me to write the whole thing in one ...

    Sep 7, 2021
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Science Fiction Re: Cehyn in the Earth( Chapter 4)

    Avoid all other things except the three eyes. Morever, the third eye is a bit lower than in the pic

    Sep 7, 2021
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: I am without a language

    Hey Alliyah! Thanks for the review. I re-formatted the poem. Thanks for letting me know how to do it. I will edit the poem and try to use that metaphor ...

    Sep 7, 2021
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: I am without a language

    Hey Lizzy! Thanks for the review. That ray was not meant to be capitalized. Guess my keyboard is the devil behind this. And about the other line, that was intentional ...

    Sep 7, 2021


Everything’s edible if you’re immortal.
— Feltrix