ForeverYoung299

Hey! Forever here for a short review! You did a great job with the poem. You managed to capture the feelings of a human being who is very much involved ...

Hey! Forever back here for a short review! The chapter was pretty wonderful and I guess the whole novel is gonna great. Here, the story takes a nrw path or ...

Heyyy! Forever here for a very short review: Critiques: The best we can do is find a river. Not only will it provide us with water, but campsites are usually ...

Hey! Forever here with a review! First of all, this chapter actually has many grammatical mistakes. However, those can be fixed with a good editor as you yourself told. So, ...

Hey Forever here for a review and also with a new reviewing style: :D Characters The boy: I don't know what you really wanted to convey through this boy, but ...

Hey! Here as requested: So, as you mentioned, I will mainly be focusing on the character development and the flow of this story. Plot development It was a great start. ...

Hey RandomTalks, here for a short review!! It was late afternoon. The sun was angry and it was torching the world with its rays, as though teaching it a lesson. ...

Hey! Forever here for a minute review! Hope it helps. It’s as if the world played a trick and left me still as it spun in a blinding pace— Vertigo. ...

Heyyyyyy! Forever here for a review!! I have just spotted a single mistake or you can say it's just a suggestion from me: You have taught me many life lessons ...

Hello! Forever here for a very short review! Perhaps the shortest review ever. So, let's begin. I loved how you have described what seemed, at least to me, writer's block. ...

Heyyyy! Forever here for a review. So, the critiques first. I have got only a couple of them. “Falling in love is like walking a paper thin line above oblivion. ...

Heyyy! Forever here for a review! Zlog response “Yes yes I know, but every day he asks me if I’m ready or not it’s annoying!” I guess it will be ...

Hey! Here for a very short review!! Hope it helps you My critiques first: I have a feeling I am being watched I guess putting a that between feeling and ...

Hey! Here for a very short review! He woke her when he found her like that, and he brushed the black chalk from her hair and forehead sticky with sweat, ...

Hey! Forever here for a review! Let's get to the critiques first: That night, the room Nicoletta and share is quiet. After I finished my hour with Alexander, my parents ...