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Re: LoaMR: Ch. I: Unforgotten Murder 1 (Reworked)
Hey Mail(ice)! Forever here for a short review! Like a compost heap, the building was rotting inside and out and was shunned by all its inhabitants. It's better to write ...
Sep 4, 2021 -
Re: A Carolina Millennial in A Prehistoric Tribe: Chapter Five
Hey! Forever here with a review! This was a great chapter and a lot of things happened here. And sorry for the late review, I am just not being able ...
Sep 6, 2021 -
Re: Survival: The Escape, Chapter 3.3
Hey! Forever here with a review!! This is meant for #reVIEWS. Let's see if I have managed to learn anything at all. So it was quite interesting. Seems like the ...
Sep 4, 2021 -
Re: Survival: The Escape, Chapter 3.2
Heyy!! Forever here with a review! First of all, with the description of the computer or the laptop. It's always better to include the size. When you first described it, ...
Sep 4, 2021 -
Re: Fate
Heyyyyy!! Forever here with a review!! Characters: That was a good twist at the end. When you started describing the animald and told the cages were meant for the animals, ...
Sep 3, 2021 -
Re: we all walk upside down
Heyy! Forever here with a review! First of all, this was a great poem with a use of a lot of positive techniques that helped the poem to become more ...
Sep 3, 2021 -
Re: A Day Off Part 1
Hey! Forever here with a review! I found it from Whatcha's review thread and thought I would leave a review. First of all, there was a good twist in the ...
Sep 3, 2021 -
Re: Self- Love
Hey! Forever here with a review! So first of all with the punctuations. This article has some good tips about how to work with the punctuations of the poem. You ...
Sep 3, 2021 -
Re: The Quest for Fire - Into the Mists - Chapter 13
Hey! Just for a short review for the RevMo. I will try but let's see what I can do. So from what I could interpret, the story seems to be ...
Sep 3, 2021 -
Re: The Purge II
Hey Buranko! Forever here with a tiny review!! So first of all, this work, as mentioned by you. I couldn't find anything like that... Forgive me if my review is ...
Sep 3, 2021 -
Re: Survival: The Escape, Chapter 3.1
Heyy! Forever here with a review! First of all, i will go with how they can test the door's material. If I were they, I would have thrown something on ...
Sep 3, 2021 -
Re: The Rainbow Connection
Heyyyyyy!! Forever here with a short review!!! First of all, I would like to say that this was awesome. To begin with, the character, that is, the narrator. The narrator ...
Sep 2, 2021 -
Re: The Lonely Warrior
Heyyyy!! Forever here with a short review!! Characters: The soldier. He is really lonely. A soldier being exiled is not a very common phenomenon, at least it wasn't in the ...
Sep 2, 2021 -
Re: Needs title :-)
Heyyy!! Forever here with a review!!! Characters: Miranda and the ghost. Miranda seems to be a very courageous person, enough courageous to face a ghost and well, not to abandon ...
Sep 2, 2021 -
Re: Mouse
Hey!! Forever here with a short review!! I really like it. You used great imagery and descriptions throughout the poem. However, I had some confusions. Let's get to that. It ...
Sep 2, 2021