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Re: Then I Remembered
Hey! Forever here with a review!! I quite like the story. Let's get into the review. I hate the way how people were being very judgemental in the story and ...
Sep 23, 2021 -
Re: Gnarled Branches
Heyy!! Forever here with a review!! This was a thoughtful and good story. I liked how it focused on the inner feelings of the boy and mind-seeing things rather than ...
Sep 23, 2021 -
Re: The Power
Heyy!! Forever here with a tiny review!! First and foremost, what caused them to break up? I mean why did she even tell him about them breaking up when they ...
Sep 23, 2021 -
Re: Children of Harrow
Heyy!! Forever here with a review!! This was a great short story. Let's get right into it. PLOT The plot is about a stolen power. I don't remember reading about ...
Sep 23, 2021 -
Re: Mending Hearts
Hey! Forever here with a review!! First of all, change the formatting. Don't give any sort of formatting to the story. It's more than hard to read it and now ...
Sep 22, 2021 -
Re: Survival: The Escape, Chapter 7.4
Heyy!! Forever here with a review!! This was a bit relaxing part, in my opinion. I really like how your story continues in alternate tensional parts and relaxing parts. It ...
Sep 22, 2021 -
Re: Robbed
Heyy!! Forever here with a short review!! Okay, it was confusing bit still quite a good short story. While reading this, I had a feeling that thid was some sort ...
Sep 22, 2021 -
Re: love never dies
Heyy!! Forever here with a review!! I love happy endings and I really liked the story. So, let's get right into it. Characters We have three main characters here. First ...
Sep 22, 2021 -
Re: Casius Fletcher and the Adventure of the Australian Emerald
Hey!! Forever here with a review!! This was a good short story with some mysteries. First and foremost, I got an extreme Sherlock Homes' vibe here. If you just draw ...
Sep 22, 2021 -
Re: Trick
Heyy!! Forever here with a review!! This was a good story, I have a few confusions though. Let's get into those. First of all, the story was a bit vague ...
Sep 22, 2021 -
Re: Then the Silence Broke
Hey! Forever here with a review!! To begin with, this was a great short story. I like the sense of mystery and the tiny revealations that took place during the ...
Sep 22, 2021 -
Re: 30,000 Shades of White
Heyy!! Forever here with a tiny review!! You have a really good short story here. I liked how you managed to give us a hint that thid 30000 shades of ...
Sep 22, 2021 -
Re: Waiting for the scream
Heyy!! Forever here with a review! First of all, the story was awesome. Now into the review. The first thing I wonder about is if there is any supernatural cause ...
Sep 21, 2021 -
Re: The Doll and the Cave
Hey!! Forever here with a review!! I wonder what the story was actually about. I do have an idea of a few things happening in the story but in all, ...
Sep 21, 2021 -
Re: The Silent Scream
Hey. Forever here with a review. I really like the story you provided us with. It was such a heart-touching piece. I was about to cry after having completed reading ...
Sep 21, 2021