Forestqueen808

Yay! I liked this and I really want to keep reading. I love how she talks about the guy being so intimidating and I bet...they meet again??? Keep me posted ...

It took me a while to get into it. I didn't fully understand it, so I may need to read it again. But for the most part I liked it, ...

Wow. That really hit home for me. I could never stop loving this guy over and over again last year. Even though he wasn't the best for me. It was ...

Wow. That was really deep, and I liked it. I can relate to it. Its like when I lost my grandpa...I felt the same way. I didn't find many errors ...

It was really good! I liked it! It was very emotional but it was amazing!

I really liked it. I think about when I used to cut myself and this poem made me cry. It really brings out the emotion and everything. It was really ...

Wow. I really liked that. It really hit home for me. It was very well written and really want to read more lyrics from you! Keep on writing them songs!

Yay! Another lyric post by you! haha anyway. I only saw a few errors and really liked it! I've felt like that before and I know I've written thousands of ...

I really liked this. I could really feel the character's fear and emotion. There was once where you put on instead of one, which i don't think you meant to ...

That sounds really awesome. It would sure catch my eye. I love it how you said he became the mark of death and everything and I'm interested! I was wondering...what ...

Thank you guys so much! In the next chapter they are gonna talk more about her past so yeah! Thank you!

I really really REALLY like it. It was really good and interesting. Will Smith's Character in I am Legend I really liked how you compared it. It put a smile ...

I am very excited for this! I love dragons so...I love this! Keep on writing!

Thanks you guys I'll work on it! :elephant: :thud: