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  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Unspoken

    Tiger!!! My tiger buddy...I shall review this poem! To the day in the night When a heart beats in fright And you lay down your head Nuzzle the pillow on ...

    Nov 28, 2009
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Chained: edited

    Hi its me Forest! I'll be your reviewer today! Chained to the fear that has kept you in the same spot for so long I think since it's a poem ...

    Nov 28, 2009
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Life's Beauty

    Hi! I'll be your reviewer today! Colors brighten earths surface, Cascades of green cover hillsides. Who are we to take away from life's simple pleasures? I like this, it really ...

    Nov 27, 2009
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Dear Daisy

    Hi Aqua! Like I promised...I'm reviewing! It was that time when we went fishing, I think it should be: It was about that he time when we went fishing, You ...

    Nov 27, 2009
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Guilty Suicide

    Hi! Sorry it took me so long to review it for you! It was my contest...sorry anyways. I was listening to the song when I read this. It made me ...

    Nov 27, 2009
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: TigerGate, chapter two

    Hi its me Forest! I'll be your reviewer today! The clock that hung in the hallways claimed it was nearing 8:34 pm. I think you mean hallway...singular. And it looks ...

    Nov 25, 2009
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: I'll miss you my beloved friend.

    Hey Pudin! Its Forest, and I will be your reviewer for today! My friend, my dear friend, do you remember that day? the day I first met you the first ...

    Nov 25, 2009
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: A Journey of Dreamers {Part I.}

    To be honest with you...this confused me. Its in the poetry section...but it says at the bottom: TO BE CONTINUED. That was my biggest problem. Poems aren't like that. Just ...

    Nov 25, 2009
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Drowning

    This was a really profound poem. It really kinda hit me home. I love the rhyme scheme, it gives it a great feel, since not a lot of poems on ...

    Nov 25, 2009
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Remember Me; A Tribute

    Hey JD! I'll be your reviewer today . Her hair once long and cascading down to her back, This would sound better if it was just "Her hair once long ...

    Nov 25, 2009
  • Novel / Chapter » Fanfiction, General Re: Legend of Zelda: Wings of Darkness (Revised!)

    I really like the plot and I know if I was Vanessa, I would be like...totally flippen out and hugging Link!!! Too bad I'm not....But anyways, I read it over ...

    Nov 24, 2009
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: TigerGate, chapter 1

    The only things I noticed was the things Seraph pointed out! Dang, I need to get here quicker! Again, I really liked this. I really want to know more. I ...

    Nov 22, 2009
  • Short Story » Fantasy, General Re: TigerGate

    That was really good. I only caught the same things Irish did, so I didn't really want to put them here, since it was already said you know? But I ...

    Nov 22, 2009
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Emerald Eyes

    Wow, that was really emotional. I could tell you were talking about a cat...you were...right? Cause it was descriptive, but not too discriptive. I loved it, it reminded me about ...

    Nov 21, 2009
  • Short Story » Romantic, General Re: Song Called Love

    Wow, I liked that, it really caught my attention, and since I had a very romantic experience today, along with some of my friends. It really made me smile, how ...

    Nov 13, 2009


Writing is like love: the real thing is a lot less romantic
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