Flux

Flux wrote: I saved you especially for my eightieth review. I'd do, like, a major-er milestone like a hundred ... but who knows how long it'll be 'till I get ...

Wow Razi! No nitpicks from me really, except that seriously, this could also be a poem. I'd love to hear the music to it, though! Innocence lingers until you see ...

Now, just a question ... I see the "Gender: Male" in your profile blurb thingy ... and the point of this contest is to write in the view point of ...

I know nothing at all about poetry -- absolutely nothing ... except when something sounds good. So as I've decided to review this, I'll put my corrections in bold . ...

Wow . What a powerful poem -- and I'm not just saying that. What an interesting thought, perspective, description brought into all this. So, as I can't really find any ...

Hey, this was a really sweet little poem! Fimbling fingers turning sideways in their clumsy confusion -- handholding really wasn’t so difficult, but I knew that you were flustered-blustered, red-fac

Why hello there! I'm here with a teeny-tiny review to give! First off, for script-writing, use brackets instead of those star-thingies! Writer's Block: [ scans the story ] Hmm. This ...

Why are you so brilliant? This is probably the best piece of non-fiction I've read ... ever ! ...take two generous, squelchy heapings (or as much as the plate can ...

Tell me again -- why are you amazing? Oh, I know why -- because even though i haven't read any of this (amazing) stuff, it still made me laugh! You're ...

I saved you especially for my eightieth review. I'd do, like, a major-er milestone like a hundred ... but who knows how long it'll be 'till I get there! Now ...

The vampire feeds on the redness of my apple. Sounds like the cover of Twilight . Blast it. Such a simple world preys on chickens, but a greater force eats ...

Aw, this poem was great! Now, as I'm assuming this is from the perspective of a mouse, I thought it was cool what he sees compared to everyone else -- ...

Hey there Ben Franks! This was a great piece. It had a lovely voice, and really puts into perspective to all us writers just how much all the classic tales ...

Hey there! Really great title -- it caught my attention! I was small, roughly 110 pounds, but on a Junior High team I managed to play running back and outside ...

Hulloooo! Great title -- just thought I'd put that in first, before I start with the actual nitpicks and such. It is a city, a small one. Great line, but ...