Flower~Child

Please review people

I like the message of it. I have never pictured a annoying cube that way haha. Oh well now I guess I will.

I really like this, at first I was like ok this is going to be depressing, but it isn't. It really shows true life of the emo people.

I think it is interesting, but I don't quite understand it.

The reason it got weaker was because I couldn't think of any words to fit the last part. It was like brain freeze. Oh and the ryming, I have seen ...

I liked the emotion in this poem, but I don't see why it is rated R. Over all it was a good poem.

I like this, I am very shy myself so this relates to me.

I love this poem! You nailed the way most teenagers think about such a thing. And how can they know when that is all they do haha. I guess I ...

I like it, it has a nice turn in the end haha. I think that it is very ummm i dunno original I suppose.

I really like this poem, it's very down to earth so to speak.

I think this is a beautiful poem. I think I know what you are getting at so I understand all the wording you use.

I liked it ok, but it really kept me guessing at what you were trying to get at. You kept good ryme but just try to make it more clear.

That was a great poem, I can see him. It's like I am truely there haha. I wish I had your talent.

But see there was nobody I was thinking about when I made the poem. So that makes it even more hard. Hahah and I am from the south so ya, ...

I do need work, I made that a long time ago haha. I dunno really though I will try better next time.