Flower~Child

This is supposed to be funny?? Anyway I don't think this flows very well at all. I think if you gave it flow, and something a little more funny it ...

I like this ok I guess. As you said it needs work, and such and such. It does give the world view of things, but I really don't want to ...

hahahhaahhahahhah yes i am one of those people

Hmmmm I agree to some point, and then again to some point I don't understand what you mean.

To me this has a good message, but it doesn't flow. It goes from talking about this in the same set of lines and then changes. I would like this ...

I like this and I agree with what was said above. This really gives the emotion that young kids have in the middle of the night when they have watched ...

I really like the emotion in this. Like niteowl said I don't know what happened, but it still has good discription. Anyway yeah I like it so keep writing and ...

I love this I thought I reviewed it earlier, guess it didn't save. Anyway its great. Keep writing.

I do like this alot. Also I am familiar with Psalms, I read them all the time. Anyway keep up the good work.

Wow this is touching to me, if that's not to weird for you. I am a animal lover and I hate it when they die, it is one more life. ...

Haha I feel stupid cause I didn't know what all of the words meant haha. I did however know Jabberwocky haha. All in all it's really good.

I like this but it seems kind of rushed. It has good structure and everything else looks fine. Thats just me though haha.

I like this, I do think there is some ryme to it though, is there supposed to be? I think there should be on or the other if so haha. ...

I like this, it's not really my style, but it is a good poem.

I love this, it gives a good picture and is very creative. (love you signiture btw)