Flower~Child

I love this. I have so many emo friends like that it's crazy! Anyway I can't really review what I like. Keep Writing -Flower-

Maybe but I see errors in everything now a days.

I don't think light would loose his temper like that. It just isn't him.

I want Violet to get with the guy triplet.

Very true, but every book has errors, and it would take a advanced writer to realize it.

I do like this, I think it is really good. I agree with the person above though about the repetition.

Hmmmm I have had trouble picturing characters. I pictured Jasper with dark hair, and emmett with blond he he. Yeah I think there are errors, but every book has them.

Hahahahha I used to watch this show, but the plot took a major change and I didn't like it. Anyway this was hillarious I love it. You need to write ...

hmmm it is a little short, but in this it is good. It needs a little work, but I do like this. Keep Writing -Flower-

I like this alot. It has great detail, and it gives what you think of war. I don't see much wrong with it, it needs more punctuation and such, but ...

I like this, but I agree with kris on the bad points. It could use a little improvement. Keep Writing -Flower-

I liked this alot, I wish I could write like that. Anyway I do agree with most of what he said above, but other than that this was amazing. Keep ...

This is amazing, and I understand everything you are saying. The only thing I can see that is wrong with it is the fact that it has almost no pucnuation.

I really like this. I don't think you can really review what you like so I will leave it at that. Keep Writing -Flower-

a...but the idea is that without hardship and pain...the guy kills himself because he doesn't know how to take it...because he never did.... and if it rhymes its by pure ...