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Flower~Child

  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Braindead

    Hey, Flow here and I will be your reviewer for the evening. I think this is very short and simple, but there isn't much meat to it. I like the ...

    Apr 28, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: .

    I really liked this so I thought I would comments on it. It's not really going to be a review or anything. I felt like I was reading a page ...

    Apr 28, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: .

    Flow here and I'm going to try and give you a decent review today. I haven't attempted in a while so bare with me. First of all, this has nothing ...

    Apr 28, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: The After

    Flower here as requested! One thing I noticed is this is not a format for a poem. It should be set in stanza's and this should be done. It reads ...

    Apr 22, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Regrets & Love

    I am going to break out one of my reviews that has been long forgoten by the writing world for you today. To be completly honest love poems aren't my ...

    Mar 30, 2011
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, General Re: Dregan's Path Chapter 1: Trip

    Ok, so I am here as requested my friend! I really did enjoy reading this. I wasn't to fond of you havn't the old timey time line for the first ...

    Mar 6, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: What I Am

    Hello, Flow here and I will be your reviewer for the evening. Ok, so I agree with Perse on this one. I do think this poem was very powerful. It ...

    Feb 4, 2011
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: No Other Man

    I read this piece and I completely related. You have so much emotion in this piece. I love the style you have. I like the long lines that you have ...

    Jan 28, 2011
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: A Needle in the Haystack

    Well, hello there my friend. The name of your poem attracted me because I just wrote a poem and used the phrase (A needle in a haystack) in it. So ...

    Jan 25, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Lamppost

    Ok, since you have generously commented on two of my poems, I believe I owe you a review. Forgive me if my review is choppy, but I am going to ...

    Jan 23, 2011
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: Worlds of Serendipity (Chapter 1)

    Well Classy I'm finally here as promised like a month ago. I see you have some very nice reviews, so I don't really have much to comment on. I really ...

    Jan 12, 2011
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Love & Lust

    Edited Eh, well I seem to have missplaced my quote button so I am going to have to do this by hand. My name is Flow by the way (shakes ...

    Jan 12, 2011
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: The Only Exception

    Well it is currently not letting me quote you so I am going to have to do it the old fashion way and copy and paste! Flow here by the ...

    Jan 4, 2011
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Dream

    This is simply amazing. I really enjoyed reading this, and it's not your typical love poem. The only nitpic I have is you say We're are you. It should be ...

    Jan 4, 2011
  • Other » General, General Re: Short Popcorn Chapter

    Hey there, Flow here with a semi-quick review. The thing I noticed most in this peice is their are numerous parts that are un-needed. I think in stories you should ...

    Jan 4, 2011


These were autumn mornings, the time of year when kings of old went forth to conquest; and I, never stirring from my little corner in Calcutta, would let my mind wander over the whole world.
— Rabindranath Tagore, The Cabuliwallah