Flower~Child

I liked the begining, but toward the end it just seems like you are shoving a person away. It turns from emotion to nothing. Most poems go like let me ...

This is my first semi romantic poem. It isn't that great, but tell me what I can do to make it better. You turned and looked into my eyes. I ...

I liked this, excepted for the forcing of old language. I also think that you really didn't get to the point until halfway through. So the first part wasn't all ...

I like this, but I really coudn't figure out what she was. It may just be me, but I feel a lack of story behind it. I think that if ...

I really like this poem. The one thing that I wanted to comment on the most was the title didn't jumped out at me. I don't know why but it ...

The first thing that I thought of when I clicked on this poem is that the title doesn't catch my attention. I think you need something that jumps out there. ...

All I can see right now is the repition of kill me slowely. I don't think you need to use this so much in the poem. I also thing that ...

I really like the emotion of this. I think that you have a lot of reitition in it though. I think that you could change it to be more new ...

I like this except for the fact that it makes me kind of mad haha. My friend is living this right now and it annoys me that she likes the ...

I really like this. I love poetry that rhymes, and you don't really see it much, and if you do it's not good. That said yours was amazing! I gave ...

I really just scanned over this, because it's just a basic O my goodness I love you, and there isn't anything new to it. You only use imagery in one ...

I think that this was a very simple poem. It really needs more color and imagery, and a story. You really just jumped from subject to subject and made it ...

I really like this, the title didn't really jump out at me though. My favorite part of this was the second what would you call it....paragraph thing haha....stanza thing. Anyway ...

Here are some of my favorites. 1.The host 2.Twilight 3. Percey Jackson and the Olympians 4.Crank (best book ever) 5.Because I am Furniture (it was ok) 6.Some of the harry ...

I really llike this. It had a lot of details and those are th ekind of stories I like. I really didn't see anything wrong with it. One thing I ...