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Re: Mixing the Motions
Hello there, Flower here, and I am leaving a quick comment. I just wanted to let you know that I adored your poem! It had a very nice flow to ...
Sep 11, 2010 -
Re: The Tears I Couldn't Shed
Well hello there, my name is Flower, and I will be your reviewer for the evening. Before I begin I just want to let you know that I really like ...
Sep 11, 2010 -
Re: love
Hello there, Flower here, and I will be your reviewer for the evening! Welcome to YWS by the way. I hope that you are finding everything ok. If not them ...
Sep 10, 2010 -
Re: Stop
Well hello there, my name is Flower, and I will be your reviewer for the evening. And after waiting for so long, I wouldn't begin your poem with the word ...
Sep 8, 2010 -
Re: No Weeping
Hello there, Flower here, and I will be your reviewer for the evening. It will be a short review at that, and I apologize in advance, but I didn't find ...
Aug 31, 2010 -
Re: Addiction
Hello there, Flower here, and I will be your reviewer for the evening! Addiction all it takes is one. Capitalize the A. one drink , or one cigarette, I think ...
Aug 31, 2010 -
Re: the drugs, the devil, and me
Hello there, Flower here, and I will be your reviewer for the evening. I will start by trying to fix most of your capitalization and punctuation deals, well the ones ...
Aug 30, 2010 -
Re: Diary
Hello, Flower here, and I will be your reviewer for the evening. [quote="Calligraphy"]I am seething I think that you should put a comma after seething. It isn't nesessary, but I ...
Aug 30, 2010 -
Re: The Shower
I only really have one thing to critique. I think that I was perfect at first, but then you started jumping around. It was like the whole subject got changed, ...
Aug 30, 2010 -
Re: Love, Awkwardness, and Moonlight: As Told by a Third Wheel
Hey there my friend. Well this was a very nice poem, and I can relate to the other girl...since it was me that you were writing about. I really like ...
Aug 29, 2010 -
Re: fade
I like this poem, but I don't like the lack of punctuation. I think it detracts from the poem. I could leave the stops up to my imagination, but you ...
Aug 24, 2010 -
Re: The last day
Hey screamandshout, Flower here as requested. I will start by going over almost all of the paragraphs and talking about them. [quote="screamandshout"]She sits in her seat, unable to refrain from ...
Aug 14, 2010 -
Re: Deleted post
[quote="mollytate"] “I’ve never seen anyone connect with Antonia like that,” I remembered to say. “You easily just made her day. Hell, with the way she’s regarded to around here, you ...
Aug 13, 2010 -
Re: Baby Doll
Hey, Flower here as requested. Sorry I have been a little long, I had school and didn't even get to stay all day because of a migrane. Anyway back to ...
Aug 13, 2010 -
Re: What happoned to 'You and Me'?
Ok. Flower here and I will be your reviewer for the day/evening whatever it is haha. Oh I love your name and avatar by the way! Anyway. Well to me ...
Aug 5, 2010
