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Flower~Child

  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Mixing the Motions

    Hello there, Flower here, and I am leaving a quick comment. I just wanted to let you know that I adored your poem! It had a very nice flow to ...

    Sep 11, 2010
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: The Tears I Couldn't Shed

    Well hello there, my name is Flower, and I will be your reviewer for the evening. Before I begin I just want to let you know that I really like ...

    Sep 11, 2010
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: love

    Hello there, Flower here, and I will be your reviewer for the evening! Welcome to YWS by the way. I hope that you are finding everything ok. If not them ...

    Sep 10, 2010
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Stop

    Well hello there, my name is Flower, and I will be your reviewer for the evening. And after waiting for so long, I wouldn't begin your poem with the word ...

    Sep 8, 2010
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: No Weeping

    Hello there, Flower here, and I will be your reviewer for the evening. It will be a short review at that, and I apologize in advance, but I didn't find ...

    Aug 31, 2010
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Addiction

    Hello there, Flower here, and I will be your reviewer for the evening! Addiction all it takes is one. Capitalize the A. one drink , or one cigarette, I think ...

    Aug 31, 2010
  • Short Story » General, General Re: the drugs, the devil, and me

    Hello there, Flower here, and I will be your reviewer for the evening. I will start by trying to fix most of your capitalization and punctuation deals, well the ones ...

    Aug 30, 2010
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Diary

    Hello, Flower here, and I will be your reviewer for the evening. [quote="Calligraphy"]I am seething I think that you should put a comma after seething. It isn't nesessary, but I ...

    Aug 30, 2010
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: The Shower

    I only really have one thing to critique. I think that I was perfect at first, but then you started jumping around. It was like the whole subject got changed, ...

    Aug 30, 2010
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Love, Awkwardness, and Moonlight: As Told by a Third Wheel

    Hey there my friend. Well this was a very nice poem, and I can relate to the other girl...since it was me that you were writing about. I really like ...

    Aug 29, 2010
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: fade

    I like this poem, but I don't like the lack of punctuation. I think it detracts from the poem. I could leave the stops up to my imagination, but you ...

    Aug 24, 2010
  • Short Story » General, General Re: The last day

    Hey screamandshout, Flower here as requested. I will start by going over almost all of the paragraphs and talking about them. [quote="screamandshout"]She sits in her seat, unable to refrain from ...

    Aug 14, 2010
  • Short Story » Romantic, General Re: Deleted post

    [quote="mollytate"] “I’ve never seen anyone connect with Antonia like that,” I remembered to say. “You easily just made her day. Hell, with the way she’s regarded to around here, you ...

    Aug 13, 2010
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Baby Doll

    Hey, Flower here as requested. Sorry I have been a little long, I had school and didn't even get to stay all day because of a migrane. Anyway back to ...

    Aug 13, 2010
  • Short Story » Romantic, General Re: What happoned to 'You and Me'?

    Ok. Flower here and I will be your reviewer for the day/evening whatever it is haha. Oh I love your name and avatar by the way! Anyway. Well to me ...

    Aug 5, 2010


You know that place between sleep and awake, that place where you still remember dreaming? That’s where I’ll always love you. That’s where I’ll be waiting.
— J.M. Barrie, Peter Pan