FlowerPower

This is so nice! It's short and sweet and mysterious. I really wish it was longer because I have so many questions! Are these two divorced and and she's trying ...

Okay so I liked the idea that you were going for but I think it just needs a little work. I think it would help if you were to break ...

Hmm, that was interesting. I really like the dialogue between the two of them, it seemed really natural and it wasn't awkward at all. I didn't like the "sixteen different ...

Hello there! I really enjoyed this piece, especially the beginning. I really liked how you focused on him losing his wings and showing us how his back looked now that ...

Hello there, lets get the review started. Okay so I absolutely loved the way you started the story off, I was hooked from probably the first sentence. However, my interest ...

This surely was an interesting piece, I've never read anything about a cross dresser before so this was kind of new to me. First thing I really noticed that you ...

I found this poem to be pretty cool, it took me a while to understand how the title fit but I eventually got it. I really liked how you ended ...

Hello there! I thought this was a cool piece and I liked how you divided each paragraph with the prayer. But thought the vampire who bit her should have had ...

I found this to be a pretty cool piece, there wasn't much that I found wrong other than one thing really. You use a lot of simple sentences that would ...

Can I just say this is perfect? Because it is. I really enjoyed this story, from beginning to end. I think you could have added more details like what they ...

I thought you kind of transitioned to fast from them waking to the car to her then dying in his arms. I think if you add more detail to the ...

Can I just say wow? How can you say your not good at short stories, this was absolutely amazing, like no joke it brought tears to my eyes for this ...

For a short story it was reallllly good! I hope you continue it so that we can find out what happens to here. Like some have already commented, some of ...

The imagery was very good, and I enjoyed reading it. It is well descriptive. But the "oops sorry. Wrong person." in my opinion ruined the the ending for me.

Hey, thanks for reviewing that story for me. I really like how you started it off, your word choice really helped me picture what was happening in the scene. It ...