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Re: Neither Pomegranate Seed Nor Serpents Tongue: An Everbound ( My W.I.P ) Poem.
Hello, I am Anorak and I'm reviewing using the YMS'more method. Top Graham Cracker - What I Know I'm guessing the main character was taken out of her life and ...
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Re: The voices
Hello. I'm here reviewing using the YMS'more method. Graham Cracker - Interpretations and Impressions I like your writing style. How the main character describes her life and what her thought ...
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Re: The Right Satisfying Moment
I relate to your observation. I don't want to manufacture computers, but I do love anything computer science, sewing, and writing. I haven't done it in a while, but I ...
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Re: I Met A Guy
I like how you repeat the same stanza. I normally dislike repetition in writing, but when it's written well and fits the type of writing, I can't resist it. I ...
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Re: Smoking love.
"Opening the box, revealing his treasure, a shining wave of relief pours over his face, while it truly reveals his torture. Our torture." I like this sentence to show how ...
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Re: Obsessed
I love stories like this, but many are from the perspective of the victim. Yours is different. The narrator's thought process describes how much he loved Jake. how delusional she ...
Mar 6, 2024