Young Writers Society

Hi, people!
First off, all the positive reinforcement you've given me has been really encouraging! Thank you so much!
Just to let you know, it's actually narrated by a more masculine nonbinary person and not someone who would be using she/her pronouns. No worries though if you mistook them for being female; no one else would know that except me really— no hard feelings, since it technically can be narrated by someone of any gender.
Have an amazing day/night!
(Again, no worries!)

I like how you repeat the same stanza. I normally dislike repetition in writing, but when it's written well and fits the type of writing, I can't resist it. I like how simple it is; it doesn't have deep sentences or complex words but it's still a very fun and sweet read. A poem doesn't have to be complex to be good. I like that in the end, the narrator is counting down the seconds until she sees him again. She regrets not taking advantage of the time she had to get his number, which shows how desperate and how much she liked him. Great work!

I like how you repeat the same stanza. I normally dislike repetition in writing, but when it's written well and fits the type of writing, I can't resist it. I like how simple it is; it doesn't have deep sentences or complex words but it's still a very fun and sweet read. It is very cute, and a very nice poem!

I like this poem. Pretty good. scratch geometry dash

Hello, I Like the prose is simple and effective. The repetition is used cleverly it seems like whoever's POV is going through every moment together and realizing their feelings. I also like how you can the small jitters and the regrets near the end it's not in your face but gives the feeling of the start of a crush. Overall I don't have much to say it's simple tightly done and generally sweet. I do like the little details like archery and the like it gives a sense of life to the poem.





Keep it up and remember to drink water!