FlamingPhoenix

Hey Shade thank you for the review, you picked up on Richards character rather quickly which is a good thing, right? Anyway I agree with that you have said I ...

No, no it was me, I said sea-green, so I went back and changed it to blueish green. :D

Thanks for pointing out those mistakes! I'll make sure to watch out for things like that in the future. I thought his brother had blue eyes too? Maybe I wrote ...

Thank you for pointing that out, when I wort that part I completely forgot he had a mask on. O_O He could have kissed her through the mask but that ...

Thanks for the review Icy! Its really helpful. When I rewrite the book I'll make sure to remember everything you have said and hopefully add it in. XD

Thanks for the review!

I think its the water power, I think its almost like another arm type of thing, just out of water. I'm not to sure @Gravitem will explain i think. Lol. ...

Thank you for the review! :D

Thanks for the review @Gravitem and I are still getting into the feeling of writing together, but I think we're getting a lot better. But I'll keep what you have ...

Thanks for the review Lib, it sure came in quickly. Lol even though I read it aloud I still missed a few things. Thanks for pointing them out. Oh and ...

I feel like I've been threatened. O.O

Thank you Myth! Some times I have typos with the Their and there, so I'll watch out for that. I'm glad you liked the flashback, I thought it would be ...

Lol, when I rewrite I'll try and put that across more.

Thank you for the review Lib! He kind of has a plan in mind, his following the letter him mother left behind, then I will have him form a final ...

Thank you for the review! Once a finish the book, I'll might start again, and fix up what it missed.