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Re: Essay Please Help
Hi fizzygirl here for a review, ok so first of all if this is an essay I think you need to make it more personal and less formal. For starters ...
May 3, 2017 -
Re: oops
Hi fizzygirl here for a review. I don't really have any criticism for this poem but a few suggestions. First off there's no need for a comma between oh and ...
May 1, 2017 -
Re: depression isn't funny
Hi fizzygirl here for a review. I was looking through poems and I told myself I'm going to sleep now but then I saw you poem title and I said ...
Apr 30, 2017 -
Re: Black Widow
Hit fizzygirl here for a review. Feel free to ask if you have any questions about my review and I hope it helps you improve your writing. Firstly I really ...
Apr 30, 2017 -
Re: My debut short story at the YWS.I would like to request you all to read this. Hope to write a better short story next time.
Ok hi fizzygirl reviewing here. If I'm going to be brutally honest your grammar is messy but so was mine for my first story, when you wrote "I had almost ...
Apr 30, 2017 -
Re: Hangup
Hi fizzygirl here doing a review! I don't feel this piece has any flaws it just seems perfect, I mean maybe there should have been one more comma but I ...
Apr 30, 2017 -
Re: Play Dead, Longing
Fizzygirl here review time! Wow that was pretty intense. I have to say I really loved it though, nothing like I have ever read before, I don't think I have ...
Apr 30, 2017 -
Re: Head bang
Hi fizzygirl reviewing here, I hope you find this helpful and if you don't I opologize in advance, ok let's get to it. Well for starters I would just like ...
Apr 30, 2017