Fireweed

A theatre company in my town performed this. Incredibly sad. And scary.

Very moving...

Short and sweet, nice rhyme and rhythm. If it had gone on too much longer, though, it would've gotten slightly annoying. Just too HAPPY, you know? But nice work!

I just finished the first one and liked it alot. Bartimaeus is indeed very funny. I'm looking forward to the next 2 books...

All I can say is really, really disturbing and really, really good.

This was quite sweet, and I loved your descriptions of the sunset and the night sky and the acres of farmland, I could see them all clearly. Throughout the entire ...

Okay, here's a wee bit more. Sorry it took so long. Imp and Misty, thanks again for your lovely critiques. They were both very nice and helpful, and I really ...

Thank you so much!! I'll probably post more tomorrow...

I really like what you have so far. Audrey seems like the kind of spunky, adventurous heroine that I love. I'd love to see what happens to her and her ...

Thank you, that was very helpful. ^_^ I do tend to get a bit carried away with description. I'll try to get rid of some of the unneeded adjectives.

Sounds interesting, perhaps I'll check it out...

Wow, thank you!! I wasn't expecting that kind of praise for this. Thanks alot. :) I'll post more soon... Any other comments on the beginning are welcome!!

Feh... this is quite old, I hoped no one would bring it up again; I'm a bit embarassed by it. It's pretty childish... I hope my writing's somewhat more mature ...

I liked this; it flowed well and had good rhyme & repetition, and a serene, soothing feel. This is minor, but in the fifth stanza I think "lost soul" would ...

Very sweet. I love the stanza with the metaphors about oceans and bridges and islands.