Fireweed

thanx crysi :)

i like this alot. its short and sweet, like duskglimmer said, and it has a soft, comforting mood to it. why do you loathe it?

ooh, i like!! great ideas and description. this is very creative.

its a pretty good poem, but im not the religious type, so its not exactly my thing...

weird, yes, but i like it!! its a little darker than what i usually like to read, but its really good and seems to come sraight from the heart.

I like is disconnected, but it seems natural and heartfelt, which is more important. And I really like the title. "Midnight Musings..." cool. i think the title fit the poem ...

wow. its definitely unique. the part about buxom tomatoes put SUCH an odd picture in my head. ughh...

Wowie Zowie!!! I loved it!!!!! thats awesome. writers block sucks....

I like. i love the first line," life is a wind tossed wave that rushes for the shore..." 8)

Ya, its really sweet. I agree with Hekate Girl about how the title really catches your eye...

I like it. It has a really nice rythm and rhyme pattern. i think the last line, "you. Youre so confusing" should just be "you. youre confusing."

i like it too. it does a have a soft, quiet kinda mood. i really like the phrase,"your gaze is sewn to my soul." good job.

well, im not a big acrostic fan, but this was pretty good, 'specially if its your first poem. and i loved the theme, being the tree-hugging hippie that i am...

Thanks everyone!no one posted on this for such a long time I had posted it. I read east too... it's cool. I... borrowed that phrase... I know im a no ...

no it wasnt stupid at all jennafina, i liked it but i just thought the sea of grey kinda fit the story better,no offense. :D