Fireweed

i love the word serindipity. its so fun to say!!! i like this. it has a very natural feel, the way you worded it is lovely. its very scattered, which ...

wow!! thats awesome. the rhyming seems really natural, the lines are short and simple, yet powerful so they say alot without dragging on. i can really relate to the feeling ...

WOW. thats incredibly sad. you have a great voice. this has great emotion, its so raw and truthful and heartfelt. awesome imagery too. dangit, the whole poems awesome! seriously, this ...

i like this alot, though the rhyming seemed a bit forced in places. i think its cool how it covers so many different emotions; the mood switched from being joyful, ...

nice. i agree with ieatworms, the "sweetness and whimsy" of it was really appealing. my favorite line is "take me by the hand, feel your toes in sun-kissed sand..." is ...

ya, pretty much what twinkling starz said. i did like it alot though. it had beautiful imagery and seemed really passionate and heartfelt. the way you worded everything just sounds ...

awww, thats so sad!! :( *sniffles* i like it though!! its sweet, yet powerful, and has great imagery like xanthan gum pointed out. it flows really nicely, too. the only ...

well, i have to agree with boni bee, but since you want more, i'll tell you why. i guess i dont really have the authority to review this since im ...

i like it and i can really relate to it. Ive never heard ashlee simpson but i know most music like that is crap. however, i thought this seemed real ...

WOW, jane!!! i am SO proud of you!! you wrote two whole chapters of a story without putting in any space ships, jumpsuits, weird machines or anything else sci-fi!!! way ...

i like the the first part of it alot; its simple and innocent but really powerful at the same time. when you get to the part about the phsycward, it ...

thats awesome. however, it created a lot of different images that didnt quite fit together. id really like to see the picture, the poem is so intriguing... i really like ...

coolio!! nice imagery, and it all seems really hearfelt. the rhyming seemed a bit forced in some parts, though, and about this part: "a thought between us, hearts intertwined, this ...

its interesting. very cool imagery. its choppy, pretty much random thoughts and descriptions that dont connect to each other, but i still like it. i especially liked the last bit,"buttons ...

i like it. the rhyming is great, like jennafina said. it seems really natural, not forced at all. this kind of reminds me of a blues song or something. i ...