Firestar

I was actually glad that Firestar didn't kill Tigerstar. It would have been very cliche.

I've read them alright!!!! Dark River is so awesome!!!!

The beat of the song was a bit bumpy, but it's a good start!

I like it. It has good flavor and flows well. May we see more poems from you in the future.

Interesting! Skipping from the first paragraph to the second paragraph is awkward though.

Is this a prologue? If it is you should edit your title to Masquerade prologue. This story sounds great! Hope you write more!

Sorry but I didn't get what this poem was about. It sounded so good at first but then you lost me. So the verdict is good use of words, but ...

Interesting! This poem caught your attention and held it, but sometimes the rhythm of the poem got bumpy. I think you should change the title to something like The Fairy's ...

1) No 2) Yes 3) You're are doing well in that department. 4) Yes

LOL Great piece of work!!!

I like it!! The only thing that's confusing is going back and forth between the words on the page.

What you really need to do is get a title for this otherwise nobody will understand it. I thought it was also a bit rough for a poem.

Very simple, yet incredible. It really touches the heart.

What genre is this song? Pop, R&B, Country, what?

Really sweet. *sniff sniff* Not much to fix here, just a few rough spots here and there but that's it.