Firepower13

Thank you! ;)

Thank you for the advice! If I had written this closer to Christmas, it definitely would have made it with more frantic pacing, a 'clock ticking down' sort of vibe, ...

I actually prefer it without a comma. I wrote it with two olds to keep the rhythm, and I think a comma would slow it down. Thanks a lot for ...

Nananananammamanannanan BATMAN.

Nananananammamanannanan BATMAN.

I have read the rest of the story now, and it was awesome! I can't wait for more, seriously! This story is like if Warriors and Lost made a baby. ...

Thank you for the advice, and for reviewing! I probably won't edit this one too much as I am definitely happy with the way it reads right now, but I ...

As a matter of fact, I think I might! Thank you for that idea!

Thank you so much! :D I'm always happy when someone says they enjoy my poetry. It makes my day. (I did add punctuation in there, since two people said there ...

I'm so happy you liked it! The paper crane is someone I know and care for deeply. They are a very great person but right now are suffering from a ...

That particular line is a reference to the fact that computers can be fixed by turned them off and on again, but people can't. We're not machines. Thank you! I'm ...

Oh, interesting! And you're very welcome!

Thank you!

Thank you, and you are absolutely right, actually. I couldn't find a word that rhymed with free. I edited those lines- I think they flow better now.

Thank you! I honestly couldn't think of a good rhyme for the word free, actually... I rewrote those lines now, I hope they make more sense.