Firelight

Ah, yeah, i see now. Sorry about that!

Whoa. Talk about a cliffhanger! I loved this and I realllly want to see why the door burst open and why the room was farmiliar. Also, I would like to ...

I'm writing a book about the Titanic, and this really inspired me. It was a great twist, something I have never heard before. I love it!

Wow. I loved this :) my favorite part was the taxes not being paid.... It made me want to fly over to Pompeii and give those poor frozen dwarves some ...

I love this... It's perfect

This is amazing!! Beautiful work!

I love this story! It had a lot of discription with good vocabulary. The story really kept you hooked the entire time. I didn't see any mistakes, so good job ...

Ok, I think I got most (hopefully all) of them! Thanks for your help!

Thank you so much!! I will get to work right away on fixing those errors! Chapter two is being written now!

Thanks for your review and kind words :) I'm working on the second chapter that I will post when I finsh! Thanks again!

This is fabulous. I love it. It has so much heart to it. I seriously have no words.

This story is amazing. It has so much heart! I can assure you, this beginning is great! Your feelings are expressed so well. It has a mysterious air to it ...

This is really great! I love the descriptive word choice in it. I like how in the end you say"but always hoping". It gives a positive ending note to an ...