Firelight

I am literally about to cry in the middle of class....this was fantastic

I really like this story! Keep me updated when the next chapter comes out!

Great story! I loved the end, I laughed so hard :)

Thanks!

I edited based off your suggestions :) i hope this sounds better!

Thanks a lot! Sorry I didn't PM you-totally forgot. I will definatly edit this more. As for the Prolouge thing, the actual story takes place in modern day, but this ...

I really like this piece! You have beautiful imagery here. I like how well the piece flows and rhymes. The entire piece has a really nice feel to it. I ...

OMG this was bone chillingly amazing

This is perfection

Thanks! The actual story takes place now, in the present, and this is just supposed to be some backround info needed later. I'm going to rewrite it once I plan ...

Thanks! I might rewrite it later, but I hope you'll still like it!

Thanks a lot! I didn't really do any planning or editing with this piece, so I really appreciate the feedback. I think I might rewrite a better version of this ...

Thanks a lot! This was really helpful!

Thanks! Maybe I will!

Thanks for the review! It helped a lot!